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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 19:39, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Launchballer (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 221 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Launchballer 10:54, 19 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Article was 5x expanded on the same day as nomination. Article is adequately sourced with inline citations, though provided source in ALT1 and the article only mentions popliteal pterygium syndrome as being a rare condition, rather than one suffered by 200 people in the UK. Could this be sourced? main Hook is fine. Earwig mostly returned lengthy titles that cannot be controlled, but I recommend making the following changes in the article so that they aren't so similarly worded:
  • "He suffered from popliteal pterygium syndrome" → "Pelham was born with popliteal pterygium syndrome" ("popliteal pterygium syndrome" can be wikilinked)
  • "he was nominated for best newcomer in the Chortle Awards" → "he was a Chortle Awards nominee for Best Newcomer" ("Chortle Awards" can also be wikilinked)
Otherwise, QPQ complete. No other issues found. Please ping once issues are complete! Thanks, B3251 (talk) 23:34, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Oops, confused one List.co.uk piece with another. Resolved the two issues of close paraphrasing. Popliteal pterygium syndrome is linked in the lead, and Chortle Awards is linked via "Chortle Student Comedian of the Year" - I don't think extra links are necessary.--Launchballer 08:55, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Concerns resolved, thank you. I also made sure to update ALT1’s source for you. :) B3251 (talk) 14:59, 5 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]