This article is written in Canadian English, which has its own spelling conventions (colour, centre, travelled, realize, analyze) and some terms that are used in it may be different or absent from other varieties of English. According to the relevant style guide, this should not be changed without broad consensus.
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects:
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Crime and Criminal Biography, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Crime and Criminal Biography articles on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Crime and Criminal BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject Crime and Criminal BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Crime and Criminal BiographyCrime-related articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Canada, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Canada on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.CanadaWikipedia:WikiProject CanadaTemplate:WikiProject CanadaCanada-related articles
" Bluestein's Lakeview Club did more than $13 million a year" - earned
"On March 11, 1963, he was found guilty, and sentenced to 10 years despite coughing up blood due to the tuberculosis he contracted as a child" - what does him coughing up blood have to do with the sentencing?
Post-release
"While he was in jail, his father died on May 14, 1964, with his mother dying on July 27, 1970" - might flow better as His father died on May 14, 1964 while was in jail, while his mother died on July 27, 1970
"mobsters Vincenzo Cotroni and Paolo Violi were over-heard" - no need for the hyphen
"After the Rizzuto crime family were not re-paid" - same here
Death
"In November 1998, Murdock pleaded guilty to three counts of second degree murder, was sentenced to life imprisonment" - missing 'and'
I couldn't find many issues with this one. It's overall well-written and structured well, so once the above are clarified this too will be good to go. ♦ jaguar01:06, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
♦ jaguar 01:06, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
♦ jaguar 11:42, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
