Talk:Johnny Hatley/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:23, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:21, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

I copyedited the article here
I honestly have no other comments, nice work.
Source spot check: 2, 4, 5, 10, 13, 19, 25, 29, 36, 39
- Ref #36 you have on two consecutive sentences. You can just have it once after the second sentence.

Putting on hold just to make sure you are good with my copyedits. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:59, 31 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Made the one correction you suggested. I'm fine with your copyedits. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:25, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:22, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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