Talk:John William Lambert/GA1

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Reviewer: JPxG (talk · contribs) 06:28, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do my best! jp×g

This has some stuff about a James Swoveland affirming to have ridden in Lambert's car in 1891, that might warrant mention.

@JPxG: Thanks for hint (nice catch). I have that article in my article already eleven times as Ref #4.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:50, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
User:JPxG Any other issues I should work on? --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:43, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, this one kind of fell off the radar. I will go through it in a bit. jp×g 04:39, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Y Article is quite stable. Has not been the subject of any controversy except from an IP address repeatedly adding stuff like "where he learned how to fly" and "harold".

Minor amounts of general fluff like "That was a good thing, since", not a big deal.

N There were about 300 horseless carriages built up to 1895,[4] but Lambert was the first with a functional working automobile that he created in 1891 Huh?

Done Copy edited accordingly. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:41, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

N Lambert's father was the president, and he was the treasurer and general manager Lambert was the treasurer and general manager, or his father was?

Done Copy edited accordingly. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:52, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Y Ref 1 looks good.
Y Ref 2 looks good.
Y Ref 3 looks good.
Y Ref 4 looks good.
Y Ref 5 looks good.
Y Ref 6 looks good.
Y ~~Ref 7 isn't accessible for me but I will try to get a hold of it somewhere.~~ It isn't very load-bearing, so I will AGF.
Y Ref 8 looks good.
Y Ref 9 looks good.
Y Ref 10 looks good.
Y Refs 11 - 18 look good.
N Ref 19 is "newspaper clip "Oldest Resident of Ohio City" "Death Claims 1st Passenger of gasoline auto"". No year, no publication, no author, no link... :(

Done Removed, as other inline references in the paragraph cover the first accident.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:00, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have been a little consumed by tasks today, so might have to get around to finishing this tomorrow. jp×g 04:49, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

User:JPxG All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:28, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]