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GA Review

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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 13:09, 30 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 13:09, 30 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good, passing as GA. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:47, 30 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Writing and formatting

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  • "taught school" - either be more specific as to which school or what type of school, or take out "school"
  • "with whom he had either two[1] or three[2] children" - infobox says two
  • Spell out numbers under 10
  • What's a trunk line?
  • Is the title Education Minister or Minister of Education?
  • "which, contesting their first election" - check agreement
  • Check hyphen use - see WP:HYPHEN

Accuracy and verifiability

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  • "he died February 15, 1936, on his way to Jamaica" - source for infobox saying he died in Ottawa?
  • Journals in works cited should include page range for article
  • Need accent on Mahé

Broad

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No issues noted

Neutrality

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  • Some minor phrasing problems - be sure to maintain an encyclopedic tone at all times

Stability

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No issues noted

Images

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No issues noted