Talk:John Kirkbride (musician)
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[edit]Made an attempt to improve style and readability with a rewrite. Hopefully, no changes to substance or emphasis, but I'm a Wikipedia neophyte, so enlighten me if I've strayed. Weldon Keys (talk) 01:15, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks Weldon, the text and the style is much better now. Sorry for my bad english, but I am german, and I tried to translate the text that I did in the german Wikipedia for John Kirkbride.
- any changes are welcome
- --Ervog2 (talk) 16:36, 1 November 2008 (UTC)
The first sentence of the "Life and Career" sentence needs fixing, but I'm not sure what it's trying to say. Any ideas? Grebbsy (talk) 21:40, 20 October 2014 (UTC)