Talk:John Hugill/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review will be posted when it's morning where I am. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
- I've decided to pass this article as GA - congrats! Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 14:19, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
Writing and formatting
[edit]- The sentence about his marriage might fit better at the end of the first paragraph under "Early life"
- "from 1921–1923" -> "from 1921 until 1923"
- Magor or Mahor?
Accuracy and verifiability
[edit]- Note 1 cites Evans and Miller, but the reference cites Elliott and Miller - which is correct?
- Combine identical refs, ex. 5 and 10
- In the last three entries of "Works cited", why is the middle Toronto not linked while the other two are?
Broad
[edit]- Do we know anything else about his children and his later life?
Neutrality
[edit]No issues noted
Stability
[edit]No issues noted
Images
[edit]- John Hugill.jpg - source link "expired"