Talk:John Hines (Australian soldier)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:32, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

No disambiguation links

The External links section is empty so can be deleted unless you plan adding something there.

It contains a link to a spoken version of the article, and according to Wikipedia:WikiProject Spoken Wikipedia/Template guidelines this is where such links need to be placed. This seems a bit odd to me, but I presume that spoken word articles are intended to assist sight impaired readers, so it's best that links to them are in a consistent location in articles.

The web site Kelly, Darryl. "Just Soldiers". ANZAC Day Commemoration Committee of Queensland Incorporated. http://www.anzacday.org.au/justsoldiers/justsoldiers.html. needs an access date added

Citation 14 E00822 for consistency should be Collection. Australian War Memorial or the other website links changed to the article title.

That's the name of the website (which is an item within the AWM's collection database) and appears to be consistent with the other AWM links

Unfortunately not. The only record of this is his army personnel file, which simply states 'discharged medically unfit' on 20 January 1916.

A good read and fits the stereotype of an Aussie Digger to a T. Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:32, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]