Talk:John Fresshe/GA1

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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 14:03, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll start this in the next couple of days. auntieruth (talk) 14:03, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

he also used them as his agents in Calais to further his wool trading, as Walderne did in 1388....Walderne furthered his own wool trade or acted as agent for Fresshe?

minor text hiccups here. Please review....

I don't understand the caption under the first image.

please clarify why you think an info box would be too political for this man? auntieruth (talk) 20:02, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Auntieruth55: If I may take your four points in order.
- I have clarified, I think, now, that Waldern was an apprentice being employed in such a scheme?
- I have reviewed your copyedits; they are, as ever, excellent.
- I have tweaked, added links, and hopefully, improved generally the caption under the first image.
- I think—not.
Thanks for the review—hope all's well, as usual. —SerialNumber54129^{paranoia /cheap sh*t room} 19:29, 4 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Serial Number 54129: Excellent work- pass AmericanAir88 (talk) 17:19, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]