Talk:John Flinders Petrie

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Page is just awful

This pages is exceptionally awful. It's written like an obituary rather than an encyclopedic article. On top of that it spends too much time trying to explain mathematical concepts, which it does very poorly. I've made some minor changes to adjust some of the language without modifying the informational content, but this needs a serious overhaul that I don't have the time to do right now. AquitaneHungerForce (talk) 16:51, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]