Talk:John F. Tierney/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: -- Cirt (talk) 19:41, 21 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this article. -- Cirt (talk) 19:41, 21 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Since it's been over a month, I'll review this article in the next few days. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 06:15, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

To start things off, Ref #25 (White House veto threat) is a deadlink. Fix that while I go over the prose. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:26, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Is somebody actually handling this? AGK [•] 17:28, 30 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The editor's still active, and I got swamped on multiple fronts, so only getting to it now. Here are the prose issues with the article:

For references, page numbers should be included where applicable. for example, ref #27 (stepson arrested) should have B5 added.
isolated single-digit numbers should be written out, i.e. "4 percentage points" should be 'four percentage points'.

Just a few issues, so I'll put the article on hold for five days and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:44, 31 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article looks better now, and since the issues are fixed I'll pass it as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:11, 2 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]