Talk:John David Booty

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unclear writing

This article is so poorly written, it's difficult to decipher some of its sentences. For example, in this sentence, who is the person who earned credits to graduate, Booty or his father?--

"Booty prepped at the Evangel Christian Academy in Shreveport, Louisiana but left a year early after his father (who was the team's quarterback coach) left the staff, having already earned enough credits to graduate."

This sentence seems to imply that Booty, Bush, et al. went to the same high school:

"He [Booty] headlined a class that was considered the best that season, and included other NFL-bound recruits such as Reggie Bush, LenDale White, Steve Smith and Sam Baker."

However, it appears that these players didn't go to the same high school. If that's the case, then what is the "class" that Booty "headlined"? Is this an allusion to all the high school football players graduating in the same year? If so, what does it mean to say that the class was "considered the best that season"? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.84.217.243 (talk) 21:22, 20 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]