Talk:John Cunningham (RAF officer)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 22:33, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article qualifies for GA status. But to show I read it, I have a few fixes.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- Subject's name is misspelt in the lead
- In the Heading "de Haviland apprenticeship", the "D" should be capitalised
- "Cunningham began his engineering career with a some menial projects " delete "a"?
- Captions do not have full stops unless they are proper sentences (per MOS:CAPTIONS)
- "but nevertheless, the flying suits nor the cockpit was heated" suggest "neither the flying suits nor the cockpit were heated"
- "On 15 May 1940, 604 was moved to RAF Manston" delete "was"
- "Hall would later became Cunningham's managing director and boss" suggest "Hall later became Cunningham's managing director and boss" or "Hall would later become Cunningham's managing director and boss"
- "A pair of elevation aerials were located above and blow the wing surfaces" suggest "A pair of elevation aerials were located above and below the wing surfaces
- "He expended all ammunition against it, save for a cannon that stopped" suggest "He expended all his ammunition against it, save for that of a cannon that stopped.
- "a He 111" suggest "an He 111" ? Should "A 8./KG 55" be "An 8./KG 55" ?
- "Sholto Douglas accompanied the King whe appeared at Danebury Hill " should be "Sholto Douglas accompanied the King, who appeared at Danebury Hill"
- "He had to gave up when his windshield iced over" should be "He had to give up when his windshield iced over
- "forced to bale out" should be "forced to bail out"
- "Postwar" is "Post-war" in British English
- "On 1 May 1975 the British Government announced the nationalisation of the industry and British Aerospace consumed all the nations manufacturers." "nations" should be "nation's"
- "From 1980 he was appointed Chairman of the Sir Geoffrey de Havilland Flying Foundation, " should be "in 1980"
- "The medals were subsequently sold to raise funds for the Bentley Priory Battle of Britain Trust Appeal for £384,000 on 7 September 2012." suggest "The medals were subsequently sold for £384,000 to raise funds for the Bentley Priory Battle of Britain Trust Appeal on 7 September 2012."
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citations to reliable sources, where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- File:JohnCunningham1942.png UK copyright expired - public domain
- File:De Havilland DH-94 Moth Minor Vabre.jpg - OTRS ticket
- File:Bristol Beaufighter AL-61A.jpg - Creative commons
- File:Aircraft of the Royal Air Force 1939-1945- Bristol Type 156 Beaufighter. MH4560.jpg UK copyright expired - public domain
- File:John Cunningham by Cuthbert Orde.jpg UK copyright expired - public domain
- File:BEA de Havilland DH-106 Comet 4B Berlin.jpg - OTRS ticket
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- That'll do. Passing.
- Pass or Fail:
As an aside, Geoffrey de Havilland Jr is the first non-American I've come across with a "Jr". Correct the quibblers and I'll pass the article. Cheers. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:19, 6 March 2015 (UTC)