Talk:John Crosthwaite
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Conflict of Interest / Neutral point of view
[edit]17th Feb. 2011
COI I have already declared a possible COI (25 Oct.2010 ) as the subject of the article is my father. I managed to do all the research by looking through his many papers and have tried to be as neutral and unbiased as possible. I have stated only facts that can be confirmed by articles in newspapers, magazines, books, websites, and letters and papers I have. There are 63 references, 58 of which mention him by name and three photographs of him with some of the people mentioned in the article.
Raycrosthwaite
27th April 2011
There are now 73 references, 68 of which mention John Crosthwaite by name and six photographs of John Crosthwaite with people well known in motor racing featured in the article.
Ray Crosthwaite
Assessment
[edit]The article is thorough, the tone is encyclopedic, the narrative covers all the key points, and the car information is well-sourced. However, there are many, many personal bits of information (almost all of it) that ISN'T sourced (like being raised by mother and sister) and could be contentious. And the sources listed could be expanded to include authors, page numbers, etc. Those changes could well bring this article to 'Good'. EBY (talk) 17:12, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the useful feedback. raycrosthwaite — Preceding unsigned comment added by Raycrosthwaite (talk • contribs) 12:00, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
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