Talk:John Crichton-Stuart, 2nd Marquess of Bute/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:16, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:16, 25 May 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review - I think I've made all the changes below. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- mother, former Lady Elizabeth McDouall-Crichton shouldn't this be mother, "the" former...? and McDouall or McDougal?
- Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- and later his paternal, and later "by" his...
- Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- Watch for overlinking.
- What does this mean? by reading the local newspapers at a distance
- but these all worked independently to Bute Do you mean reported directly to Bute?
- Changed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- He was in post during He was in office?
- Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- Violence broke out, arrests were made on 10 May, use "and" in stead of the comma
- Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- Link yeomanry and Royal Glamorgan Militia
- Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- Two images of Lutton Hoo, licenses for all pics satisfactory.
- Fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- 1 DAB to fix, external links OK.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:52, 30 May 2013 (UTC)