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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:16, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:16, 25 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review - I think I've made all the changes below. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:24, 8 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • mother, former Lady Elizabeth McDouall-Crichton shouldn't this be mother, "the" former...? and McDouall or McDougal?
  • and later his paternal, and later "by" his...
  • Watch for overlinking.
  • What does this mean? by reading the local newspapers at a distance
  • but these all worked independently to Bute Do you mean reported directly to Bute?
  • He was in post during He was in office?
  • Violence broke out, arrests were made on 10 May, use "and" in stead of the comma
  • Link yeomanry and Royal Glamorgan Militia
  • Two images of Lutton Hoo, licenses for all pics satisfactory.