Talk:Johannes Jørgensen

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Bad translation

This article was directly translated from the Danish version of it on Wikipedia, probably with an automatic translator. I copy edited for clarity, but I'm not sure if it is true to the original.

If you look at the Danish version, you can see that there is a major problem with it not being written like an Encyclopedia article. I tried to neutralize the sensational language some, but a more important problem is:

Someone with who speaks both languages needs to proofread the facts.
Even on the Danish article, there are no inline citations. It's hard to tell what are facts and what are not. Any English speaker can't check the current references, because they are in Danish.

Overall, the article is okay, it doesn't need to be deleted, just cleaned up a little.Editfromwithout (talk) 05:35, 31 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]