Talk:Johann Peter Hebel/GA1

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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk · contribs) 22:47, 20 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to alert the contributing editors that checklinks found a dead link in Ref #31. Please take care of this in the meantime while I complete my review. Thanks! --Tea with toast (話) 22:50, 20 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Issues that need to be addressed before final review

Hello, other than the above mentioned reference that needs fixing, there are a few other changes needed with the references before I can pass the article.

Refs #1, 13, 14, 17 all require expanded citations. You need to cite the name of the website that is hosting them, among other bits of info. It appears to me that these are from letters that were written. If so, I think it is also worth including the names of the author/addressee.

Since these are letters, I don't see what should be expanded. The author is Hebel himself. The website did not host these letters but just copied them.--Tomcat (7) 12:14, 30 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref #1 is not a letter, and I don't think #17 is either. There is no harm in stating explicitly that Hebel is the author. I have suggested some useful expansions for #1 (esp. added translation of title) and #13 (correcting the title). I'll leave #14 and #17 to you, Tomcat. --Stfg (talk) 13:41, 30 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I corrected and translated the titles. Regards.--Tomcat (7) 19:27, 1 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Added the publishers. --Tomcat (7) 19:29, 1 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref #27 needs a source.

Added reference.--Tomcat (7) 12:14, 30 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will put this article "on hold" until these changes have been made. Thanks! --Tea with toast (話) 04:02, 21 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have now been fixed, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:44, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]