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[edit]I've cleaned up the article, as it needed a little work. I removed some of the sources that were unusable for showing notability and I removed a ton of quotes that were added. We don't really need to use quotes when a shorter sentence will suffice. I also removed mention of her being termed "Gucci Killer". The thing about that is that this was the name of an article about her, the company she worked for, and one of her coworkers. I didn't see proof of this really being a common nickname for her, which is what the other names field is really for. We only add names there if this is a common term that the person or someone else extends to her, which isn't the case here.Tokyogirl79 (talk) 09:33, 16 November 2012 (UTC)
- I also removed the "other reading" section because it was pretty much full of her letters to the editor for the NYT and other things. Those are nice, but that's not really what those sections are really for. The other one, a BusinessWeek article, I moved up to the article as a RS.Tokyogirl79 (talk) 09:36, 16 November 2012 (UTC)