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Good articleJimmy Lavender has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
October 27, 2013Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 19, 2013.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that author Vincent Starrett used Chicago Cubs pitcher Jimmy Lavender's name for the central character in his 1944 compilation The Case Book of Jimmie Lavender?

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 16:36, 25 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to take this one; comments to follow in the next 1-4 days. Thanks in advance for your work on it! -- Khazar2 (talk) 16:36, 25 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

On first pass this looks good, and I don't anticipate any serious problems for promotion. I've made some tweaks and small changes as I went; let me know if you object to any or feel free to just revert. There's also two points below I'd like your thoughts on. More checks to come later. Thanks again for this contribution-- Khazar2 (talk) 14:28, 26 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • " In March, he signed with the Philadelphia" -- this is a bit confusing. He was traded to them but also signed with them? Perhaps I just don't know how player transactions worked in older baseball.
  • "After a short one-inning game" -- a one-inning outing, or was this a rainout or some such? -- Khazar2 (talk) 14:28, 26 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the review so far, and I do appreciate the changes you've made. I made a couple changes myself, including the the second point you made above. On the first point, before 1975, the reserve clause was in effect, so every MLB player's right were owned by the team they played with the previous season, and the vast-majority of players only played under one-year contracts. So what was being traded was his rights, he then had to negotiate his one-year contract with the Phillies.Neonblak talk - 16:50, 26 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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7. Overall assessment. Pass as GA