Talk:Jimmy Allen (pastor)

Jimmy Allen (pastor) has been listed as one of the Philosophy and religion good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: November 2, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 02:45, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I wouldn't mind reviewing this article. I see from your userpage that, while this may be your first GAN, you're no Wikipedia novice (in fact, you've been here longer than me), so hopefully the whole process will be very straightforward and painless. Just from a quick glance, I don't see any major issues. This review shouldn't take long. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 02:45, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It is very near to completely meeting all six criteria (I've spot-checked checked both accuracy to sources and originality and both are fine), but, as is customary, I have found a few minor changes that should be made:

An infobox is always a useful tool I would recommend including.
Link President of the Southern Baptist Convention where it's mentioned in the lead, since there is an article on it, then link the SBC itself afterwards.
Instead of the phrase "Allen's family struggles with AIDS" in the last section, maybe try "The struggles of Allen's family with AIDS".
It also wouldn't hurt to mention briefly what caused them to contract AIDS.

Those are the only issues I found, all very small. Good luck. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 10:48, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for that feedback! I implemented those changes. ThadeusOfNazereth(he/him)^{Talk to Me!} 15:07, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Good job. No other issues, so I've passed it. Congratulations. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 20:36, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]