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Good articleJim Kilburn has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 28, 2013Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jim Kilburn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Use ndashes (–) instead of hyphens (-) in dates' ranges.
  • "He bowled fast-paced off spin." needs a ref.
  • You may link Barnsley Chronicle and the Yorkshire Post.
  • "Kilburn's writings on the Yorkshire players of the 1930s and 1940s made them well-known to the public as personalities and he wrote several pieces for the Yorkshire Post which became well-known." comma after personalities
  • You may link England team and Australia.
  • Don't you think the Bibliography section needs a ref?

Overall good work, very well-written. I really enjoyed it. Zia Khan 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'm busy right now, will take a look later today. Zia Khan 17:50, 28 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Final assessment

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GA review (see Wikipedia:Good article criteria and WP:GACN)
  1. Well written.
    a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
  2. Factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (well-referenced): b (citations to reliable sources): c (Wikipedia:No original research):
  3. Broad in its coverage.
    a (covers major aspects): b (well-focused):
  4. Neutral .
    Fair representation, no bias:
  5. Stable.
    No edit wars nor disputed contents:
  6. Illustrated appropriately by images.
    a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Conclusion: No other issues. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 21:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    Pass/Fail: