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Reviewer: Midnightblueowl (talk · contribs) 11:05, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll field this one.

Lede:

  •  Resolved The lede currently contains information not appearing in the main body of the article. I would move this information into the main body and then re-write the lede in order to summarise the entirety of the article. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:05, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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@Midnightblueowl: I think I have addressed all your points. Any additional thoughts? Thanks so much! -- Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 23:59, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Zackmann08; just a few more issues, largely those which have arisen because of changed to the lede:
@Midnightblueowl: So I'm sitting here wondering when you are going to finish the review... Then I come look at the page and realize that for some idiotic reason I wasn't watching the page. Thanks so much! All the issues mentioned have been addressed. :-) --Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 20:21, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I'm happy to pass this now. Midnightblueowl (talk) 14:24, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]