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Sabrefencercanada, please continue the discussion here. I checked your recent additions, and it is frankly quite bad still:

  • No reference given that her sister does epee fencing.
  • You need a reference directly saying that she's short for a fencer. Don't combine two sources to reach a conclusion in neither (WP:SYNTH).
  • You keep mentioning Jin Ko's name. Are you somehow affiliated with Ko? His name only shows up in a primary source. Please try to find a secondary source instead.
  • "She has seen improvement and considerable achievement in foil fencing" is not from a neutral point of view.

You seem to be unfamiliar with Wikipedia's editing policies and practices. I suggest completing The Wikipedia Adventure first to get a grasp of how things work here. I'm not going to revert you again, but please try to address these issues first.  Ganbaruby! (Say hi!) 15:35, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I will try to address these issues. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sabrefencercanada (talkcontribs) 15:51, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, I have tried to correct it as best as possible. I am not affiliated with Jin Ko, I mentioned his name because on Hua Hua's website it states that, as well as in news articles. Jessica Guo used to learn fencing with Li HuaHua but now does with Jin Ko. I, however, know Jessica Guo, her sister, as well as Li HuaHua, and Jin Ko, because I am a senior member of the Candian Fencing Federation, the Canadian national government body for fencing which Jessica Guo is a member of. The website, Hua Hua Fencing provides good and clear information on this, which is why I put it. We are working to update the CFF website and I will add it as a source as well once complete to acknowledge these facts. I have changed some of your other suggestions such as many facts. I found a secondary source as well, and a source FIE that her sister is indeed an epee fencer. This new changes that I made are very good with sources.
Sabrefencercanada, please indent using colons (:) and sign with four tildes (~) at the end of your message. The Hua Hua Fencing site is a primary source, which should be used sparingly and with care. Using it to insert Jin Ko's name only serves as promotion for Ko, so unless you can find a secondary source that mentions Ko's name to show that he's noteworthy enough for inclusion and say explicitly that "Jin Ko is Jessica Guo's coach", you should leave him out of this article. You also cannot say Guo is short for a fencer, as per WP:SYNTH. Although I recognize that you're trying to improve the article, unless you can address these points, your edits are WP:BLP violations and need to be removed. I have reverted your edits as such, since nothing is salvageable here. Please gain consensus here before editing the article further. Also, please read Wikipedia:Verifiability, not truth.  Ganbaruby! (Say hi!) 16:42, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I will find a secondary source. But do not undo my other edits, because I have enough sources and they are all correct. Sabrefencercanada (talk) 18:14, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The changes I made were not against the restrictions and I have since removed unsourced content, such as Ko. Right now there is nothing wrong and it is all corrected and sourced. Sabrefencercanada (talk) 18:14, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]