Talk:Jessica Gallagher/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 05:49, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article some time tomorrow. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:49, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

I found a few deadlinks that need fixing: [1]. Some were marked as that but the site's down for maintenance. Those three give me errors when I click on them though. Ref #4 is especially concerning given that it's a major source used and it's not simply a news source where you can remove the url.
- Paralympic.org website no long has static linking. Found a version of the athletics page on trove. VIS found correct link. Should all be fixed now. --LauraHale (talk) 21:45, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - The Paralympic.org website does have static linking if you go through this version of the form. Not exactly intuitive though. I've re-instated the IPC link. Graham87 02:13, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    - Awesome. Thanks. When I tried it this morning through the standard path, I couldn't find it. :( --LauraHale (talk) 02:28, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"sports: Skiing and athletics" skiing doesn't need to be capitalized here.
- Fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:19, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"In 2009, she graduated from RMIT University with a Master of Osteopathy.[2] When not competing, she is a registered osteopath." These sentences could be combined, and the "when not competing" part doesn't seem necessary as that's a given.
- Fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:19, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"a teenager,[7]having found out" space after ref
- Fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:19, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Training for Gallagher involves completing ten to twelve sessions six days a week, with each session lasting between two and three hours" I presume this means 10-12 sessions over the course of a week? Perhaps make that a bit clearer, though ideally no one's going to interpret her as skiing 30 hours a day.
- Fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:45, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"After a year of training, she would increase this" she increased this
- Fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 21:19, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:16, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything checks out now, so I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:47, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]