Talk:Jessica Chastain/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 09:53, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

I will review this but not until middle of next week as the finale of the contest is this weekend.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:53, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing now Krimuk90.♦ Dr. Blofeld 09:58, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

"Her parents gave birth to another daughter, named Juliet, who after reconciling with Monasterio, committed suicide in 2003." -not clear if you mean her mother here or not or the daughter. It's strange in this context to say "reconciling" if it's not about a couple but father and daughter.

"The production led her to audition for the Juilliard School in New York City, where she was soon accepted and granted a scholarship funded by the actor Robin Williams.[6" -was it a scholarship fund for a few different actors or just her? ♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:13, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

She said in an interview, "Robin Williams is a very generous Juilliard alumnus, and gives a scholarship every two years to a student, and it pays for everything, and I got it. I still haven't gotten to meet him." So I guess she was the only one who got it that year. Krimuk|90 (talk) 15:14, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Wow, very lucky, top man he was, miss him.:-(♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:00, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

• "She went to appear in such roles in a few other television series from 2004–07, including Veronica Mars, Close to Home and Law & Order: Trial By Jury" -years in brackets might benefit here.

• "Williamstown Theatre Festival" and "Wadsworth Theatre". Mentioning the cities these are in would be useful.

• "The actresses worked together before filming, creating a consistent voice and mannerisms for their character, and in addition, Chastain took classes in German and krav maga, and studied books about Josef Mengele and Mossad history.[34]" -"creating a consistent voice" I don't like here. Try something like "The actresses worked together before filmto perfect the voice and mannerisms of the character and make them consistent. In addition, Chastain took classes in German and krav maga, and studied books about Josef Mengele and Mossad history".
• Did you already link Mark Kermode?
• Lives at Carnegie Hall, are you sure?

Hahaha!! I kept thinking it was Carnegie Hill. Krimuk|90 (talk) 15:15, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

• "passionate about creating awareness on depression" -"passionate" and depression cause really not the right word in this context.
• "From 2012–14 she has featured in AskMen's " -implies continuity despite being 2 years ago

@Dr. Blofeld: All of your comments above have been resolved, Doc.  — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 11:42, 6 May 2016 (UTC) I'll still wait for Krimuk though, thanks.♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:01, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks Ssven for addressing the comments when I was away. Dr. Blofeld, all seems to be done now. Thanks for the review! :) Krimuk|90 (talk) 15:14, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: Excellent job.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:00, 6 May 2016 (UTC)