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I'm new, so please come closer i won't hurt you. :) I found this article in the list of articles needing copy edit from February 2010 so here I am to give it a go. I'm not afraid to be bold, but I do have a few questions to any that watch this page and/or are more familiar with wikipedia standards than I am.

First, is there a particular reason that this article has both "Plot introduction" and "Plot summary" sections? If not I will combine the two sections under "Plot summary" as that seems, in my experience at least, to be the more commonly used of the two titles.

Second, under "Plot summary" the word "b-day" has been changed to "birthday" several times and then reverted back to "b-day" with no explanation. I have changed b-day to birthday, if someone is going to revert it, please provide an explanation so the rest of us can understand the reasoning.

Third, in the Film section the first sentence "A film made of the book is coming in 2011 release." has been reworded a few times, but keeps getting reverted. As it stands, that does not seem to be a propperly structured senstence and sounds weird to me when spoken. I will attempt to reword the sentence tomorrow. Please join the discussion if you feel I'm missing something and should leave the sentence alone.

Other than that, I'll start a general cleanup of the current text tomorrow. JayJeckel (talk) 10:09, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I combined the Plot summary and Plot introduction sections. I reworded and reworded a good amount of the text, but I tried, fingers crossed, to not change the any meaning. I moved a bit of the plot basics to the intro cause it seemed appropriate. I'll start looking for some good source links about the movie tomorrow and maybe see what I can do about fleshing out the end of the plot section. Please note that the last plot paragraph is simply three sentences that were left over and didn't fit anywhere else. Anyway, I'm off to bed, night wikipeida. JayJeckel (talk) 07:45, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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