Talk:Jennifer Lawrence/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:28, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
I'll have this done by tomorrow. JAGUAR 16:28, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
- I look forward to it :) Snuggums (talk / edits) 16:53, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- It is well referenced.
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Initial comments
[edit]- "Lawrence is known in the media for being a vocal advocate of feminism and gender equality" - might be beneficial to link Feminism here (or Feminism in the United States, or even another one of the articles related to it)
- "She is the youngest woman to accrue four Academy Award nominations" - the lead says she is the youngest woman, whereas the "2014–present: Established actress" section states she is the youngest person
- "She then appeared in The Beaver, a black comedy directed by Jodie Foster" - was this film released in 2011?
- "The Devil You Know, a small-scale feature that Lawrence had filmed for back in 2005 was her first release of 2013" - feature film?
- "In 2013, Time magazine named her one of the most 100 influential people in the world" - Time is already linked before, so de-link it here
- " In 2015. Lawrence was named "Entertainer of the Year" by Entertainment Weekly—a title she won also in 2012" - a title she also won in 2012
- "She has also won a BAFTA Award for..." - BAFTA is always used without the "award" after it
- Ref 80 and ref 126 are dead
- Is AskMen a reliable source? I wouldn't know because I don't review film articles as much as I used to!
- There was a discussion about it on the article's talk. I added that it just has an opinion about how sexy certain women are so I think it is fine. I also had no problem about it in my other FAs, so..
I done a full review of this but couldn't find many issues to raise. The article is well written, comprehensive, and all of the sources check out. I found a couple of dead links, but other than that there were no issues with venerability. Excellent work! I'll leave this on hold until all of the above are clarified. JAGUAR 19:06, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, Jaguar. I have addressed your concerns. – FrB.TG (talk) 20:03, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Did some of the others. Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:13, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yup, I should have said "we". :) FrB.TG (talk) 20:23, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you both! By all means, let's promote this. It well and truly meets the criteria, as evidenced by my short and lacklustre review LOL. I also want to congratulate you on the work, definitely FA material. JAGUAR 23:02, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yup, I should have said "we". :) FrB.TG (talk) 20:23, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Did some of the others. Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:13, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, Jaguar. I have addressed your concerns. – FrB.TG (talk) 20:03, 6 December 2016 (UTC)