Talk:Jenks' Day Off/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 13:10, 5 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take another stab at a silent short film article.

Here's what I found in this article:

Lead

It's written well and encapsulate what the article is about.
The lead says the film is a 'comedy', but the categories say its a drama.

Fixed that. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:44, 10 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

No problems in here as well.

Production

Well sourced and has good information.

Release and reception

"The Morning Telegraph gave a passing positive review" → "The Morning Telegraph gave a positive review of the film", much better.

Done. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:44, 10 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Move the theatre advertisements sentence in front of the The Morning Telegraph sentence.

Done. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:44, 10 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

Link some of the publishers in the sources if possible.

That's what I think about the article. I'll put it on hold for you to fix the problems. DepressedPer (talk) 20:56, 5 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@DepressedPer: All set. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:44, 10 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Consider this article a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 08:12, 10 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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