Talk:Jean Charles de Menezes/to do

1. Add details from the inquest when they come out.
2. Continue to use {{note}} and {{ref}} to document sources.
3. Continue to reword for clarity and brevity.
4. Please attribute and cite sources accurately with regards to the IPCC leaked documents.
5. If you have not recently, please review NPOV tutorial.
6. This is an encyclopedic article, and should be written from an historical perspective, as if it would be read the same 1 year or 100 years from now. The prevailing tense of sentences should be past-tense. Also avoid phrases such as "The latest reports indicate..."
7. Use British English for this British/Brazilian topic.
8. This article ought to be slimmed down! Suggestions:
   1. Use footnotes to explain items rather than explaining them inline
   2. Propose a series of smaller articles on the incident and aftermath
   3. Just edit down, remove every unnecessary word
9. The notes needs to be numbered correctly - it's a mess
10. clean up description of the incident itself, it is not easy to follow and makes little sense as is

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