Talk:Je Souhaite/GA1

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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 19:01, 26 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

"The title means "I Wish" in French" - needs a ref; there isn't one in the body of the article.
"The woman turns out to be a genie and Stokes is angry that he wasted his first two wishes because the boat is not in water and he has to pay taxes on it." Clarification needed, sentence could probably be split in two anyway. What did he waste the first two wishes on? The boss's mouth and what else? Also clarify that he specifically wanted to use his wishes on the boat
"The genie suggests that Anson should give his brother the ability to walk..." Why can't his brother walk?
Plot: like Mussolini and Richard Nixon
"I looked at all the people on the set [...] and though, 'Oh man, I'm going to be exposed as an impostor." Thought?
"Jen" is spelled "Jenn" in the "Special effects" section.
"Luckily, using digital technology, the man was erased from the scene and it was used in the episode." "And it was used in the episode" is kind of redundant.
Is there a Cinefantastique review?
Refs 5&6 are listed as appearing in the Complete Sixth Season boxset. Also, was the seventh season set released in 2000? According to this it wasn't. I'd check other DVD refs on other articles when you get the chance.

I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. Thank you for reviewing this article.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:05, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed the dates on the DVD release (it was 2003, not 2000) and you're good to go. Glimmer721 ^talk 20:09, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]