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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 04:03, 18 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • You said He played for a number of minor ice hockey teams in Michigan but then list a GTHL team.
    • I think you meant to list Little Caesars and the Detroit Kings AAA team (per body)
      • Whoops, reworded.

Playing career

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HickoryOughtShirt?4 Addressed all comments to this point! — GhostRiver 18:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Continued review

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HickoryOughtShirt?4 Done all! Thank you for the review and for working on getting a photo – my media/press pass for the Farg only applies to concerts and I've been trying to get it expanded. Hoping the ballpark will give me one soon. — GhostRiver 21:25, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GhostRiver, It's cool that you have a pass at all! I will pass this article but I am still trying to get a photo. The Stars discord seems kinda dead and Twitter/Flickr is not revealing much. You'd think someone as successful as he has been would have a plethora of free photos to choose from fans etc.. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:36, 6 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]