Talk:Japanese transport ship Unyo Maru No. 2/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:28, 7 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Starting off with the infobox, don't use citations there as per WP:INFOBOXREF; they're redundant to the cites in the main body.
- Noting this, I included references for things like the yard number because I did not mention these things in the body. However, I have removed the refs for the characteristics of the ship. Lettler^{hello • contribs} 16:18, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Fair enough.
Use an endash rather than a hyphen for number ranges like years.
Since Japan switched to the metric system in the 1920s, you should give metric measurements first.
What kind of length, between perpendiculars or overall? Miramar gives a figure for between perpendiculars.
You've mistaken height for draft
- Still have height in the main body.
Add the |ship power field to the infobox and move the 1900 bhp measurement there
Add the number of propeller shafts to the propulsion field.
In the lede add a link for launched.
the convoy that Unyo Maru No. 2 was part of was attacked by Dutch Air Force bombers awkward, rephrase. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:15, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- All of these points have been addressed. Lettler^{hello • contribs} 16:18, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Link Mitsui Bussan, although its shipbuilding subsidiary Mitsui Engineering & Shipbuilding is probably the actual builder
immediately embarked for Indochina What does this mean?
Clarify that the ship was carrying supplies, etc. for the navy
On 21 December, the main body of the Japanese naval force, including Unyo Maru No. 2, re-armed Don't you mean 22 December? And they didn't re-arm. Leaving some troops behind they got back on the ships and sailed to Kuching.
Add the coordinates where the ship sank. You can use this code to get it to display properly: {{Coord|19|20|N|125|15|W|display=inline,title}}--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:20, 30 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- All of these points have been addressed. The coordinates, however, do not work; it gives a position in Kuching town rather than in the sea. I'm almost certain this was a mistake on the part of the authors of the CombinedFleet page. Lettler^{hello • contribs} 15:27, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]