Talk:Japanese destroyer Nara (1944)/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 21:02, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
- No dead links
- No missing citations
Discussion
[edit]Prose Suggestions
[edit]Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.
Lede
[edit]- Suggest expanding lede, perhaps with the information of her fleet assignments, that she was surrendered to Allied control at the end of the war.
Sources
[edit]- Suggest archiving the Nevitt source with Wayback machine. Research into him for WP:V purposes suggest he has passed away, so the status of the website may change.
- I have made some copyedits, feel free to revert any of these. @Sturmvogel 66: That is all my suggestion, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:16, 9 January 2021 (UTC)