Talk:Japanese destroyer Kaya (1944)/GA1
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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 04:03, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
I plan to review this article. Djmaschek (talk) 04:03, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
Review notes below: Djmaschek (talk) 04:54, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
- Well-written = almost (but see comments below)
- Construction and career: paragraph 3: sentence 1: "...renamed Volevoy on the 22nd." Date unclear. If it's 22 July 1947, please say so. My eyes were bouncing between the end of paragraph 2 and the "1949" in the next sentence.
- Infobox reads: "Fate: Scrapped after 1 August 1959". Text reads scrapping order came on 2 September. Shouldn't it say "Scrapped after 2 September 1959"?
- Verifiable = yes.
- Broad = yes.
- Neutral = yes.
- Stable = yes.
- Illustrated = yes.
- Good eyes, thanks for looking this over.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:41, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
- Result: GA class. Both of my concerns were addressed. Djmaschek (talk) 20:17, 20 November 2020 (UTC)