Talk:Japanese destroyer Hatsuume

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Review: October 11, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Bold Xin Yang

Construction and service

Date stricken from Japanese service varies between the infobox and the prose.
"The ship was launched on 25 April 1945 and completed on 18 June.[6] The destroyer was assigned to the 11th Destroyer Squadron of the Combined Fleet that same day for working up. Hatsuume was damaged when she struck a naval mine near Maizuru six days later that killed four crewmen" - This implies that the mine incident was on 24 June, but Nevitt provides a date of 26 June.
- Good catch.
Nevitt suggests that it was attacked by aircraft on July 30. Do any of the other sources mention this?
- No, the whole thing is odd because Enoki also hit a mine on 26 June, so why would Hatsuume be there more than a month later, especially if her mine damage was still unrepaired.

References

The Dodson & Cant and Jentschure, Jung & Mickel references are flagging that they contain deprecated parameters. Not a big deal, but might as well clean it up since that parameter has been deprecated.

Other

Maybe add to Category:Destroyers of the Republic of China Navy?

Image licensing looks correct (not a licensing expert), and spot checked all of the citations I could. Looks good, there's not much to say on this one, gonna place it on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 17:23, 11 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for looking this over. I'll be fixing those damn references from now until eternity!