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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:27, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Pretty brief one this. A few comments:

  • suggest adding |infobox caption=Enoki to Infobox ship begin to put the ship name at the top of the infobox
    • I hate that actually. Seems entirely redundant to the article title and the name in the ship career infobox
  • escort destroyers is a dab page
  • in the lead it is "Tachibana-class" and in the body "Tachibana sub-class" perhaps add a sentence to the lead and tweak the infobox
  • use "escort destroyer" early in the Design and description section
  • move the sentence beginning "The accuracy of the Type 89 guns..." to immediately after "gun shield"
  • should it have the coord template at the top, as it isn't there anymore?
    • Good catch.

Not much to nitpick about. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 05:41, 17 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for catching all these nits.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:37, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]