Talk:Japanese cruiser Naniwa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:51, 17 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Link to Takachiho in the design section
Infobox gives crew of 325, body says 338
Infobox says completed in December 1885, prose says February 1886
Is what the ship did in 1891 known, or at least where it was primarily stationed?
"Jiyuan may have tried to pass to closely to Naniwa" - Should it be "too closely" (I'm bad with homophones)
Recommend splitting the Battle of the Yalu River section, as a good portion of it isn't about that battle.
Link the Boxer Rebellion
It looks like the page link for Duus needs tweaking, as it's showing up as pg. 1 in the results when it's really linking to pg. 82 on IA
- Deleted the link to the specific page
Some sort of error in ref 48
- Nothing's showing up on my computer
sources look reliable, and image licensing looks okay.

See if my changes are satisfactory. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed the ref error (apparently it was missing the pp=). Passing now. Hog Farm _Talk 05:01, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]