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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 22:22, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • " Hotchkiss 2.5-centimetre", later "were added for the 25 mm AA guns." If these are the same guns, perhaps the same units should be used?
  • "After the Americans began attacking Japanese installations in the Bonin Islands on 10 October," New heading, so remind folks who skipped down from the ToC what year we're in.
  • "but it did not attack the battleship, sinking the damaged Zuikaku and Zuihō." Do we need an "instead" before sinking here?
  • "They arrived two days later and remained there until the 12th when they departed for" I believe we're talking about December now? Then you could remove "december" from the next sentence "The attack was cancelled on 30 December"
  • Probably should mention "Cape Engaño" in teh body, rather than just image captions, if it merits mentioning by name in the lead.
  • Nitpick: Ref 28 seems to be citing a single page, not pages.