Talk:Japanese battleship Aki/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 01:23, 19 July 2013 (UTC)

Review

• The toolbox checks out.
• The copyright tag for the Brassey diagram says "life of the author plus 70 years", but "author unknown".
  • I'm gonna need a new source for that image, so deleted.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:12, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
• You use "pp." for one page in some instances.
  • Good catch.
• "20th Century": 20th century
  • Isn't it a proper noun?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:12, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
    • I don't recall seeing it capitalized in any other Milhist articles. - Dank (push to talk) 20:31, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
• "Her heavy intermediate armament is why the ship is considered to be a semi-dreadnought.": Give the reason.
  • Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:12, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
• "Aki's turbines were already behind schedule and the suspension allowed the smaller and less valuable ship to be completed more quickly and serve as the test ship for the turbines while the battleship could incorporate any necessary changes revealed by experience with Ibuki.": Maybe we could trim a bit, and also make it a bit more definite? Perhaps, if this is true: "The less valuable ship was completed more quickly, and changes made to its turbines after testing were also incorporated into Aki's turbines."
  • Works for me with one small change.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:12, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
• "as part of the defenses of Tokyo Bay": to protect Tokyo Bay
• Otherwise:

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   - Dank (push to talk) 01:40, 19 July 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:12, 20 July 2013 (UTC)

Passed - Dank (push to talk) 20:31, 20 July 2013 (UTC)