Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

• Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No copyvio Y

Suggestions

• "The ship torpedoed twice by American submarines with negligible to moderate damage before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life. Probably should "the ship was torpedoed twice by American submarines, with negligible to moderate damage, before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life."
  • Looks like somebody already added the missing "was", and I don't think the commas are necessary there.
• @Sturmvogel 66: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:14, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
  • @Iazyges: - ditto my comment at the Chūyō review. Let me know if there's anything else you see holding up the article. Parsecboy (talk) 11:49, 26 May 2017 (UTC)