Talk:Jannik Hansen/GA1
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Reviewer: Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 18:48, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I changed the lead slightly. I eliminated the space between the introduction sentence and the second paragraph. I don't see a reason to separated the two and it eliminates a one sentence paragraph. I also made a light change later in the article where the word season was used twice in quick succession as I felt it was a little awkward. Other than those minor very things its a very good read and well pu together
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- There is only one issue with the links. Reference #6 "Defense, goaltendering anchor of 2006–07" redirects to the Colts home page.
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- All images contain proper licensing.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Another solid article that I will pass once the redirecting link is taken care of.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 18:48, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Thanks for the review! Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 22:49, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. I've passed the article. Good work.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 02:56, 18 February 2011 (UTC)