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COI tag

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article was apparently created by someone connected to Deakin and edited by someone reporting to the subject of the article. The article needs to be reviewed by an independent editor for NPOV and sourcing before the tag is removed - if you review it and remove the tag, please make a note here. Jytdog (talk) 17:47, 24 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I reviewed the article, made some edits and removed the tag. Seemed overall neutral although slightly promotional so I made some slight changes. GermanBreadCulture (talk) 20:21, 31 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

New issues

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Upon reviewing the article, I noticed several issues that I tagged. Furthermore, there was a direct quote that was not marked as such. I added quotation marks and a presumed source. Rephrasing the section could also be an option, since the quote is quite wordy. The lead section is not up to date since the article for Murdoch university clearly states having a different vice chancellor. This information has been updated in the info box but the Lead section does not reflect this. GermanBreadCulture (talk) 20:35, 31 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]