Talk:Jane Dudley, Duchess of Northumberland/GA1
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:52, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
Hello! I will be reviewing this article for GA status. My review should be posted within the next few days. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:52, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
- I've decided to promote this article to GA status. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:31, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you! I'll try to fix wording issues. Buchraeumer (talk) 16:16, 23 October 2010 (UTC)
Writing and formatting
[edit]- "she was successful in working the release" - "working" is not really the best word here
Done > "achieving" - "who was her father's ward since 1512" - grammar Done > "from 1512"
- "when London surgeons already considered an amputation" - wording Done? > "were already considering"?
- "he passed a week that saw no action" - wording Done > "he passed a tranquil week"
Accuracy and verifiability
[edit]- Missing bibliographic details for Adams 1995 Done
- Page numbers for Christmas? Online version, has no page numbers (not a very long article)
Broad
[edit]No issues noted
Neutrality
[edit]- "In October 1549 he lost his princely powers in a show-down with the Privy Council" - wording Done got rid of "princely" (although correct); show-down > "trial of strentgh"
- Maintain an encyclopedic tone at all times
Stability
[edit]No issues noted
Images
[edit]No issues noted