Talk:Jamie Lawson (album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 17:02, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]I'm really sorry HeyJude70, but this article needs a lot more attention before being considered as a GA. I'm quick-failing this review because the article is lacking several rather important sections. It's completely missing a "Critical reception" section, and since it charted well in several countries, it also needs a "Chart performance"/"Commercial performance" section. You should also include information of the overall composition of the album, in a section titled as such as possibly "Music and lyrics". You should also talk more about the promotional tour that is mentioned in the article. I'd love to see this once more work has been completed; please ping me then. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 17:02, 4 March 2017 (UTC).