Talk:Jacksonville (Fringe)/GA1
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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:42, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]Plot
[edit]- "but still unable to trigger her ability" Add "is" after "but".
Production
[edit]Nothing here.
Reception
[edit]Ratings
[edit]Nothing here.
Reviews
[edit]- "A.V. Club" should be "The A.V. Club", and "A-" shouldn't be italicized.
- "and "one of its finest hours" To avoid confusion, replace "its" with either "[Fringe's]" or "[the series'].
- "Giving the episode a 8.0/10 rating," Typo, replace "a" with "an".
- "Stegall praised Olivia's dream sequence and subsequent accusation to Walter," Replace "to" with "of".
Lead
[edit]Nothing here.
In conclusion
[edit]Another great article, just a few fixes and it will pass. I'll put it on hold for seven days. Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:42, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
- All fixed. Thanks very much for all these quick reviews. When I get a chance, I'll begin reviewing more of yours. Thanks again! Ruby2010 comment! 17:13, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
- Passed! Nice work! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:15, 23 June 2011 (UTC)