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Sources

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I've placed a tag on the article to ask that it be fleshed out with more sources that are independent of the subject - while there are references to support many of the technical facts set forth herein, all but a handful of the references are from the law school itself. As written, the level of detail in the article seems to outrun the independent sources by quite a bit. Is there, has there been, much in the way of third party coverage of the subject and his achievements? JohnInDC (talk) 00:38, 18 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article tone

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While the article does track its sources pretty well - there is not much in it that seems to be simply pulled out of the air - its tone is rather promotional, and written with what to my ear seems like a lot of marketing phraseology. I intend to go through the article and make it more objective and direct, as well as to whittle down what appears to be a bit too much detail. If I can find independent sources I will add them but so far I haven't had much luck. JohnInDC (talk) 11:10, 18 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]