Talk:JFK Express

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Review: June 7, 2019. (Reviewed version).

A fact from JFK Express appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 25 July 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the JFK Express subway service in New York City never actually went to JFK Airport?

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Truflip99 (talk · contribs) 17:58, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Its route bullet was colored turquoise and contained an aircraft symbol. (If you want, you can specify that this is an AIGA symbol.)

Done

Fares and rolling stock

The premium fare for the JFK Express was collected by train conductors on board I think the fare information in the history section should be moved here.

Done

wikilink Transit police

Done

A fourth car was later added, making them 300 feet (91 m) long, half the length of a typical B Division train.
- Might want to bundle/omit sources per WP:OVERKILL

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:17, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Service history

1st p

There is a previous instance of 57th Street, which should be the one wikilinked

Done

2nd p

Within a few years of its inauguration, the service was ~~being~~ criticized as ~~being~~ a poor use of resources.

Done

JFK Airport, Kennedy Airport, etc. I would use just one alt name and "the airport" so readers aren't confused.

Done

3rd p

The proposal was still being reviewed by January 1984; it never came to fruition. -- and move the ref after the period

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:15, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

4th p

omit comma after October 29, 1989

Done

... between these two stations during those times

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:24, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

At all(?) other times, some passengers paid the extra fare to use the JFK Express to reach Aqueduct Racetrack. -- Could you elaborate on this one a little further? Why only "some" passengers paid?

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:24, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

5th p

At the time, 3,200 people were using the train per day, down from a high of between 4,000 and 5,000 riders that used it at the beginning of the service's operation.

Done

6th p

~~However,~~ This extension was short-lived as the JFK Express was discontinued on April 15, 1990 due to low ridership, which recorded as few as 3,200 riders per day.

Done

- WP:OVERKILL
Ridership on the A to the airport increased after the discontinuation of the JFK Express: in 1995, about 1 million passengers used the A to the Airport. -- semi-colon instead of colon

Done

7th p

Since the discontinuation of the JFK Express, the A train has continued to serve the Howard Beach–JFK Airport station.

Done

move ref 27 at the end of the next comma

Done

A proposal, referred to as the Lower Manhattan–Jamaica/JFK Transportation Project...

Done

Final route

Source for the station list?

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:10, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

1. publisher NYT

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

3. de-wikilink NYT per above

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

4. I think this should be via fulton history and the publisher the observer

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

5. omit all other NYT wikilinks

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

12. de-all caps for this one, and all the other ones with all caps

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

14. missing url
- I took an image of the timetable, which is in my collection, and uploaded to flickr, and added the link.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC) Done[reply]
19. use bibliographic info found, don't forget page # as well here

The page number is provided: ^: 3.14; Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

21. via flickr. need correct publisher.

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

27. page not found, might need to find it in the web archives or find a new source. if you use web archive, don't forget to use deadurl=unfit parameter

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

28. via scribd. need correct publisher.

Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:08, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

29. via nycsubway.org. need correct publisher.

Changed; Done

Great article! Not really much to edit as it is written well. --Truflip99 (talk) 17:58, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Truflip99: Thanks for taking up this article. I believe that I have addressed all this issues. Thanks again.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 19:25, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome work! Thank you for the prompt response, per usual! Congrats! --Truflip99 (talk) 19:36, 7 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]