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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:41, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


  • No DABs, external links OK.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • At that time, it was the Royal Italian Navy and put the Italian name for it in parens and italics.
    • Fixed
  • She was armed with a main battery of four 13.5-inch (340 mm) guns, had a top speed of 20.3 knots use an "and" instead of the comma
    • Fixed
  • Add a link for naval gunfire support to the mention of bombarding in the lede.
    • Done
  • Sicilia was 127.6 meters (419 ft) long overall and had a beam of 23.44 m (76.9 ft) and an average draft of 8.83 m (29.0 ft).
    • Fixed
  • Explain what /30 means.
    • Done
  • Watch your roundings for your conversions in the text.
    • Should be good now
  • Link launched
    • Done
  • three Ruggiero di Laurias and Enrico Dandolo what kind of ships are these?
    • Clarified
  • Your bête-noir in the refs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:57, 3 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]