Talk:Italian cruiser Trento/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:56, 9 February 2017 (UTC)

This article is in great shape. Just a few minor quibbles:

• link displacement in the lead and body, and aft in the body, Mediterranean at first mention, Messina too
  • All done
• suggest During one of the latter missions to attack the British Operation Harpoon convoy in June 1942,...
  • Good idea
• the body length measurement has feet in decimals, should be ftin
  • Good catch
• rounding doesn't match between the body and infobox for beam and draft
  • Fixed
• the armor belt figures in the lead and infobox don't match the body
  • Fixed
• the turret armor conversions are rounded in the infobox, but not in the body, probably applies to the conning tower too
  • Fixed
• I imagine the 12.7 mm guns (and 13.2 mm guns) were actually machine guns, I assume the 13.2 was the Hotchkiss M1929 built under licence by Breda as the M31.
  • Yes, that's right
• Do the sources say if the 20 mm and 37 mm guns were the Breda ones? If so, link.
  • Yes, but we don't have an article on the right 20mm gun.
• In 1942, the
  • Good catch
• suggest On 15 September 1930, Trento embarked on a cruise to the eastern Mediterranean that concluded in La Spezia on 21 November.
  • Works for me
• File:Trento and Bolzano NH 86595.jpg needs a tweak of the description, it currently says both vessels are Bolzano
  • Good catch
• link Dry dock
  • Done
• was tasked with protecting
  • Good catch
• suggest red stripes on the
  • Fixed
• 10 cm should probably be 100 mm for consistency
  • Fixed
• the sentence beginning On 26 November is effectively repeated at the start of the next para
  • Removed
• also, does that engagement have a name?
  • Right - I guess the link got deleted in rewriting that bit.
• fix 12–12 March 1941
  • Done

I'm done. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:37, 9 February 2017 (UTC)

This article is well written, verifiable and well cited using reliable sources, covers the topic well, is neutral and stable, and all images are relevant, appear properly licensed and have appropriate captions. It meets the GA criteria. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:39, 10 February 2017 (UTC)