Talk:Italian cruiser Agordat/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:08, 25 October 2014 (UTC)
And this one as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:08, 25 October 2014 (UTC)
- No DABs and external links work fine.
- 2-shaft triple-expansion engines Better rendered in the infobox as 2 shafts; 2 triple-expansion steam engines because each engine drove one shaft. And tell the reader in the main body that TE engines are steam engines.
- of shafts should be added to main body.
- Added both
- Agordat was stationed in the 2nd Division of the 1st Squadron Do you mean assigned here? or her location and assignment?
- Yeah, I was just trying to get some variety, but the more I look at it, it doesn't really work here.
- Missing OCLC # for Beehler. And how about links for his book, Garbett and Phelps?
- Added oclcs for all of them.
- Make the necessary changes in the class article and Coatit as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:17, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
- Done.
- @Sturmvogel 66: - anything else need to be done here? Parsecboy (talk) 14:26, 17 November 2014 (UTC)
- Done.
- Sorry for the delay, but is the figure of 300 nmi for her range correct? That seems absurdly low for a cruiser, even a jumped-up gunboat like this one.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:11, 17 November 2014 (UTC)
- Yeah, Conway's specifically mentioned their very short range as being a significant handicap and why they didn't see much use. Parsecboy (talk) 16:23, 17 November 2014 (UTC)